Sunday 23 September 2012

After the rain

Grey clouds lift, a break or two of blue
The rain that ensued has left a shine on the land
Brickwork freshened by moisture's touch
Grime and dirt of the summer trailing away to a mortal end

Steam appears as the sun once more makes its dominance felt
The flora recovers, safe to raise their full faces
Noises once again, where there had been only roar
The evening sounds of the countryside, on the wind children readily explore

And now the evening settles, shed of it meteorological hiccup
Tomorrow brings a new dawn, a new sun, a new day
Awaiting more warming rays, a return to the heat and the dry.

3 comments:

  1. Lovely poem...loved the line "And now the evening settles, shed of it meteorological hiccup" ..clever...and the whole has a nice hopeful and positive feel...you'll need to drop the 'novice' soon ;)

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  2. "The rain that ensued has left a shine on the land"
    I love this image, and I agree with Louise, the tone of the whole poem is resolutely optimistic :)

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  3. Love the poem and the photo is soo fitting...

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